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Поделиться22020-10-03 00:34:27
First time?
If that is your first submission, I look forward to your future entries as you gain more experience. Just look at the scores for 'similar stories', you are in excellent company. Enjoyed it immensely.
Great dialogue!
Dialogue is the hardest things to get right in a story, and I think you nailed it. The story is fantastic and hot. Thanks!
Отредактировано Skyorg (2020-10-03 00:34:31)
Поделиться32020-10-03 00:34:37
This was well written. I enjoyed the dialogue and the friendship between Justin and Samantha. I felt the story had verisimilitude. I found myself wishing I could have had a friend like Sam when I was in high school. The sexual part of the story was well done and enjoyable. This story stands well on its own. It certainly has possibilities for a sequel as I can see some people are looking for. In any case, it was a great read. Five stars.
Loved the story and can see it in away others might not.......my childhood friend and buddy ended up being my girl friend and wife. Good job.
Отредактировано Skyorg (2020-10-03 00:34:41)
Поделиться42020-10-03 00:34:46
Amazing
Wow that was amazing left me wanting more really hope to read more about their lives together.
Поделиться52020-10-03 00:34:51
Anonymus in
so good i love it
Поделиться62020-10-03 00:34:56
SEQUEL PLEEAAASSEEE!!!!!!!
Please please please write a sequel. Maybe it can include Jen being jealous and stuff. But we need a sequel to this. Pretty please🥺
Поделиться72020-10-03 00:35:01
Really Amazing Story
This was a really good piece, especially it being your debut. Not only was this really hot but it also had a beautiful personal touch to it - something realistic, which I often find missing in other pieces of literotica.
Поделиться82020-10-03 00:35:06
hot hot hot!
And oh so sweet too. Except for the end where she kept doubting and talking over him, very nicely done!
Поделиться92020-10-03 00:35:12
Comment " that was very hot, exciting, sensual and did I say hot!!! A hundred and ten stars💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫💫✴✴✴✴✴✴✴✴💕💕💕💕💕 I think you get the point
It's the dialogue
Great read with a tempo that enhanced the wonderful dialogue.......the buildup to the finale really made this story top shelf, I thoroughly enjoyed the journey. Thanks.
Отредактировано Skyorg (2020-10-03 00:35:16)
Поделиться102020-10-03 00:35:21
Perfect progression of deep friends
Beautiful, how many true parallels with close friends ending as lovers.
Поделиться112020-10-03 00:35:26
I loved it. It wasn't complicated but it wasn't insipid. It was just a really great story.
Поделиться122020-10-03 00:35:32
punch line was visible from the first paragraph
you could guess every major plot point from just the first paragraph but damn it it was still such a good read
Good friends to friends and lovers
Lovely story of first love
Отредактировано Skyorg (2020-10-03 00:35:36)
Поделиться132020-10-03 00:35:42
Steamii!
Kind'a makes you wish you were back in your teens again. Back when love was simple & pure, mortgages were 10 years in the future, and your wifefriend didn't bug you about crumbs on the floor or a lawn to mow. But after 15 happy years, I must confess she still regularly surprises me. A toast to personal memories, new and old, the ones remembered and those wrapped in fiction. Thank you.
Поделиться142020-10-03 00:35:50
Now that is a story. Not just "wham, bam, thank you M'am" Thank you
Поделиться152020-10-03 00:35:55
Damn! Lovecraft68...you're really good at what you do.
Поделиться162020-10-03 00:36:00
One of the best I have read in a long time...
Wow. Simply wow..
It's all here. Characters I can relate to, a story that kept me reading, a romance part that left me wanting more and rooting for the main characters, hoping they get together in the end and hot steamy sex.
Thanks a lot! This was amazing!
Поделиться172020-10-03 00:36:07
Amazingly touching and well written, BRAVO
Not my first time reading this either but it caught me right this time, I loved it.
Perhaps because my wife of 31 years decided she wanted a divorce this March.
So now I too am looking for one that has meaning.
Поделиться182020-10-03 00:36:17
Pretty Damn Awsome!!!
Thank you. You did a great job for a first time write in this category. Damn fine job indeed.
that was an amazing story please keep writing
Отредактировано Skyorg (2020-10-03 00:36:20)
Поделиться192020-10-03 00:36:25
Really great
Loved every bit of it. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks for this one, it really was incredible.
So
So what happened when Jen turned up?.
Отредактировано Skyorg (2020-10-03 00:36:29)
Поделиться202020-10-03 00:36:34
Free spirit
Absoloutely love it thank you
Поделиться212020-10-03 00:36:40
So beautiful .....!!
I was looking for something pure and beautiful and your story was AWESOME!!!!
Поделиться222020-10-03 00:36:45
Absoloutely amazing
Holy crap LoveCraft you continue to impress me with your very talented writing. Every book that I read that you write always exeeds my expectations. Keep up th good work!
Поделиться232020-10-03 00:36:50
Beautifully written and so hot
Wow! I was just looking for porn but this was beautiful and romantic and sexy and dreamy. You're a really great writer, you should be really proud!
Поделиться242020-10-03 00:36:55
Pretty damn H.O.T.
This was a great read. I love how the writer put everything together and gradually built up to the point on combustion. Can you say whew, that was hot and nasty and I loved every bit of it.
Поделиться252020-10-03 00:37:00
Nice
A great story. Always nice when friends fall in love and make love. Kudos to Justin for waiting for a special woman. I handed my "v-card" to a "bed buddy" and STILL regret it!
Поделиться262020-10-03 00:37:05
Simp
She was so in love with him, she fucked other dudes. He's a fucking retard.
Поделиться272020-10-03 00:37:12
Beautiful story
This had a heart wrenching touch the entire time it was subtly clear to the audience that she was in love with him from the start and loved the way he love for him came to light and especially loved the way it ended most stories on here aren't super romantic they're just about sex and yes they are good but this one had a romantic touch with a ronchey touch to it
Поделиться282020-10-03 00:37:18
It was heart touching
What a Great story I have to say , very well written. The story and the bonding between the characters really touched me .I never comment on any story and this is the first time I have ever commented on story . Absolutely loved the character development as you start to read the story you feel connected to the character . again Props to the author for writing such wonderful story.
Поделиться292020-10-03 00:37:23
A damn good story.
I've read many stories, but this one i like very very much. kind regards vonLassen
Поделиться302020-10-05 21:34:50
best.... amazing
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